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Dreamy Bliss

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Over Mountains, following valleys, through
  fields, crossing streams,
Wandering gently on many journeys
  in my dreams.
Long, ever so long ago, when days
  were fun,
Playing, running in the warmth
  of the sun.
Lying on the grass, watching the
  stars at night,
Yawning, eyes heavy in the
  twinkling light.
Off to bed, settling down to
  a restful sleep,
Smiling of dreams to come hidden
  away sweet and deep.

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I know this may not flow smoothly but these are my thoughts in the evening before bedtime.

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  • Desire gold member
    July 13

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    Beauty!!

    Holy Moly I missed this one too
    Oy!!!

    Where did I go to the Moon or something
    What images You have brought to the Mind's Eye
    Excellent trip and the picture is Gorgeous
    like Your words

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


    • Puppydog gold member
      July 15
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      HELLO DESIRE

      Thank you ever so much for stopping by and reading!'s I am in a very thoughtful mood lately and these thoughts are in my mind and heart.'s

  • Melodies silver member
    July 5

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    Oh, this is perfectly splendid, dear Sir! I like it SO much! It has a tender, restful quality that fills the reader with peace. BRAVO!


    • Puppydog gold member
      July 5
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      HELLO MELODIES

      Thank you ever so much! I used to truly spend days and evenings like this back home those many years ago when I was young. 's

  • azlyn gold member
    July 4

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    SIGH!!!

    The word that comes to my mind...peace...sweet peace.

    So beautiful my dear friend!


    • Puppydog gold member
      July 4
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      HELLO AZLYN

      Oh if only these days could come back again! 's Thanks ever so much for coming by to read, it truly means a lot!

  • Room without doors silver member
    July 3

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    Outstanding

    This is stunning a very pretty picture you draw in words - I am starting to drift off just reading this. A great poem with a sense of simplicity. Your poetic voice shines through


    • Puppydog gold member
      July 3
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      HELLO BETH

      Thank you ever so much for stopping by to read! 's So often I take myself back to those days when I would do these very things. Some days reliving these beautiful memories is what keeps me going strong. 's

  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    July 1

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    Wonderful thoughts to have before bed. I hope they created as pleasant of dreams. This is a very soothing read. Thanks for again sharing your positive and uplifting thoughts.


    • Puppydog gold member
      July 2
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      HELLO JEANNIE

      Thanks ever so much for coming by to read!'s I try to relax to thoughts like these and keep them in my mind while I fall asleep.

  • Amarige
    July 1

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    You're lucky..to be able to enjoy that view before bed time..that's say so much about the deep person you are..you wrote this so beautifuly..best wishes Kevin
    Ruby


    • Puppydog gold member
      July 1

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      HELLO RUBY

      Thank you ever so much! 's I am not really all that deep of thought or feeings, at least I don't feel I am. I am so tired of the world now and what it has become, I yearn for the simple times way back when.

  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 1

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    So lovely

    I feel wihin this life you have found the peace within your heart that so many search for today .Keep up the good work and pass on the serenity


    • Puppydog gold member
      July 1
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      HELLO PATTY

      I am not to sure if I have found anything or not but I do realize it is my hopes and dreams that help me go rise each morning and go out and face the day. Thanks ever so much for reading my dreams and thoughts. 's

  • Pisces rainbow
    June 30

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    it has a soft and gentle flow

    and it is lovely.

    wow, sounds sooo incredible

    thank you for such a beautiful vision.

    I love the picture, rainbow...

    God bless my friend


    • Puppydog gold member
      June 30
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      HELLO PISCES RAINBOW

      Thank you ever so much for coming by to read of my dreams!'s I try to keep these dreams alive even after all of these years.

  • Heavenly Angel
    June 30

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    This flowed perfectly in my eyes, hon
    Reminded me of when I was younger and the days were so carefree and light...sigh....
    A fine sharing from your pen!
    Have a wonderful week, sweet soul!

    • Puppydog gold member
      June 30
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      HELLO SANDY

      You beat me to this, you missed the picture which I was uploading as you read this! 's Thanks so much for coming by to read my thoughts of a lost time way back when. : I am off now to read your poem. 's
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