If your walls could speak,
Would they talk about us
And the things we've done,
As silent they've stood witness?
Would they tell of how
You've anxiously turned me to face them,
Impatiently shoving against,
As soon as I've stepped through your door...
Your left hand holding my neck firmly,
The right dropping my defenses to my ankles,
Fingers exploring realms,
Soaking in delight?
Would they express how you've made me squirm,
And burn with an uncontrollable desire;
How I've moaned for you to go deep inside,
With swelling lips begging to be hushed?
Would they disclose how you force me to the floor,
Down on all fours,
While I've whimpered and writhed,
Like a dog, begging for more?
And of how I've pleaded with you,
To drive in from behind,
As they've watched without a sound,
Us imitating two animals in a mating ritual?
Would they voice how you've raised me from the ground,
Thighs straddling your waist,
As you slipped inside, legs wrapped around,
For a ride to your bedroom,
Leaving them to wonder what comes next?
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Oh WOW!!!!
I loved this poem!! You are so good, keep up the work, Thhis was Amazing!!
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this is my phrase of the day it seems
*muy caliente* i think i got the most vivid movie going on in my mind...if my walls could talk...they'd probably say that i should stop dancing in my underwear lol
anyway hun,i'm jealous of this poem...just because i think i wrote something like this a while back and it was poo-ey...this isnt poo-ey its tres tres sexii
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you werent kidding, i couldnt write like that if i tried,it turns out all cheesy and fake like you could tell it was a virgin writing it...nice poem, it leaves a nice mental picture...it be better if i didnt know you, it kinda feels like spying...
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to tell the truth i was sping on you, lol..just kidding *spy*
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No i wont make comment. How can i make comment on this wonderful poem? How can i say i felt this poem, i didnt read .. my eyes co ordinated with heart and gave me the feelings of every single word..great job
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this is crazy awesome cool. very hott!
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wow this is wonderful, you have a talent with words,
this is so lovely, its so wonderful, your imagery and words you paint are just breath taking,
all my love,
kitty xxx -
u were watching that again weren't you...anyone can figure out from the imagery...and my walls don't speak, they are good walls, u can even say mean things to them when u are angry and they wont say them back..thats the good thing about walls...nice decieving title though, thats the best thing about this piece...and if my walls could speak, they would want me to paint them maybe...
Suggestion, next time don't watch that when writing a piece, rather remember and try to paint the face of someone u love...it would be more intimate, if u want to make it that, that is.. -
Wow, very good. I enjoyed reading this. It made me wonder though, "What would my walls say if they could speak."
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