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Just dance

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Hands reach to sky
as rhythm cracks the air.
Care free in the liquor
of days, and friends.
In the haze of night life,
release is found in the
comfort of others.
Heat takes over senses,
and we just dance.

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  • BowelsOFloveANDhate silver member
    July 23

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    Only if you could just dance, you should get paid or tips at least


  • plainoljoe
    July 7
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    from the days of old as is today, dancing is a prelude to sex

    Joe


  • PastelMoons gold member
    July 6

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    I love this--
    it is sweetly nostalgic.
    Great metaphors!
    Very clever...
    Thanks for sharing.
    ~Pastel


  • cricketjeff gold member
    July 2
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    sounds like a good idea!


  • GoodKnightPoet
    June 30

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    In a few words, you have said a lot. I really like this poem. A great write you have here. Thank you for sharing

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