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[ Lingering in the moment, lost in your eyes, ]

Lingering in the moment, lost in your eyes,

Content, I cherish the sweet surprise.
Kissing tongues tangle, making me ache,

No longer can I wait, for you to take.


Laying back, I plead without words,

As if hidden lips could somehow be heard,
Raising hips high to greet your stare,

Hoping to speak to some part of you aware.


I Beckon please enter with no hesitation,

Yet you stand firm, with no reservation,
Taunting me, teasing me, grin on your face,

Admiring how you've put me in place.



Then suddenly, you grant relief,

Knowing now I must have peace.

Penetrating with your pride,
Charging, you thrust deep inside.


Planting feet upon your chest,
To brace us both, I do my best,

Not to scream loud like before,
When places reached cut to the core.



Wondering if you're hurting me,
You ease mo-men-tar-ily,
Slowing, then come "please-don't-stop" pleas,
Whimpering I'm at your mercy.


Back in our entrancing dance,

I catch your eyes stealing a glance,

At contorted expressions, my face in full view,

Proud every one is caused by you.

Then you say, "Oh Lady," gazing,

As in disbelief, you sigh, "amazing,"
Shaking your head, as deeper you dive,
Revealing my power to make you alive.



And I know you are close to leaving,
A place I cannot follow, heavy breathing.
So easing, I bid "please don't leave me,"
Wanting to stay forever in ecstasy.


Pushing you back, I climb high,
Navigating, accepting time is nigh,
To the edge of heaven as you pursue,
Gauging the perfect rhythm between us two.


Panting hard, with quivering shakes,

Not much more can either take,
As each resists the pulsing throbs,

Not wanting to be one who robs.


But there's no stopping from this flight,
Wildly heading for realms beyond night,
Each to our own promised lands we must go,

Worlds imagined, the other cannot know.


Upon return to this earthly place,
From a visit lasting just seconds in space,
We find each other coming back to ground,
From a visit to separate paradises we together found!

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  • Boxingboy
    July 2, 2008
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    wow okay amazing

    wow now that awsome i'd say publish but i don't think you should


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    July 1, 2008

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    haha at the comment below.. this is so beautiful,
    you may want to label it as erotic/ sensual though hun,
    this is so beautiful and its full of love,
    and it does leave the reader wanting more
    keep penning, all my love,
    kitty xx

  • hellisawsome
    June 30, 2008
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    that was a nice poem