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Who the hell......

We were so united,
you where the reason of my life.
I was so excited,
I had a friend in sight.

My eyes were always for your presence,
so desirable and true,
I was crazy for your essence
the only wonderful in my life was you.

I wake up in the morning,
I put on my bandanna,
and my eyes give me a warning,
Who the hell took my banana????

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  • Rovingone gold member
    July 13
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    Really cute. I liked the humor in your piece.

  • I love the ending!! I was laughing so hard I almost fell out of my chair!! lol.. You did a wonderful job.. The flow was wonderful and the imagery was vivid as well.. Bravo.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..


    Angel
  • Cute ending, wonderful take on the picture. Some great imagery within your words. All the best in the contest