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Without

Feeling no sweet touch
Witnessing no loving gaze
Hearing no kind words

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option seven

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  • maralisa silver member
    July 1, 2008

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    you poem has such a deep sad emotions of reality that I can deeply relate to from the deepness of my childhood days it show the realitys of being unloved wonderful thank you for entering the contest and good luck


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    June 30, 2008

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    Harshly sad, this is painfully true for many young children in life
    Well penned!

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    Thank you for your entry in Child Abuse Prevention Contest & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • subliminal girl
    June 30, 2008

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    Excellent write, great take on the prompt... heartfelt and brilliantly expressed. Best of luck in the contest!