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The Halloween party



The Halloween party
continues into July
as I'm haunted
by all the people
I'm 'supposed' to be.

Which of those
is reality?

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  • playjazz67
    June 30, 2008
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    Very nice. The question begs to be asked: Which of those people do you want to be?

    Jim


    • Olivias Violin
      June 30, 2008
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      Good comment

      but I have to explain that not everything I write is entirely autobiographical. At times I exaggerate or I just like how something sounds etc..


  • xXDarkChildXx
    June 30, 2008

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    Very interesting, and it makes me think a whole lot. It makes me wonder as well, which of them is reality, very short and sweet and gets to the point, great job.