Stacked.
Flints with no spark,
Unyielding as granite.
These defiled hearts of men
Assume their familier form.
Author notes
Pic credit: http://suomyno.deviantart.com/art/Leaving-our-mark-90189749
Not sure if this works, but here you are.
A contest entry
- QUICKIE: PHOTO Prompt by Lotus-Mama.
475 points, ended June 30, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You did well with the picture prompt! As the rocks seem to be in the shape of a human form
My favorite line:
"These defiled hearts of men
Assume their familier form."
Nice job!
Amber
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this is so pretty, even without lines upon lines of words you express a wonderful meaning! its got a lot of depth and your word choice is fabulous, too! wonderful write, dear! keep up the great work!
rizzie -
i think that it was very good.
and i love that it was short and simple and yet so powerful
in any case well done. -
Cool, I love the poem and how it conects to the picture.
A wonderful write and I wish you Wonderful ideas for the future.
Rose -
Great imagery here, wonderful take on the prompt. Good luck.
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Interesting commentary on those with hearts of stone... sparkless, unyielding, marred for life as a pile of stones. So cleverly said.
Marlene -
wonderful
Hello dear one, what a wonderful write you have penned.Such strong words and great words at that! a great take on the photo prompt.
Blessings to you,
~Angel-anne~
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....Flints with no spark...
These defiled hearts of men....
Awesome word choices! Great job on this! Thanks for entering!!
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