Write you name, love!
with your tongue
on throbbibg walls
of pleasure zone
Oh, let me moan
Oh, let me scream
My prettiest doll!
My craziest love!
My kinkiest friend!
My sweetest dream!
A contest entry
- favorites by xXcrazychristinaXx by Lonely Christina.
1000 points, ended July 21, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
An Open Invitation.....What do you think?
Comments
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So Sensual
I have to admit I love each and every line but the first four lines steal my breath. Oh My!!
"Write your name, love!
with your tongue
On throbbing walls
of pleasure zone"
Hot, Beyond the Pale!! My heartfelt thank you for this so sensual post!
Lady E
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i somehow find this sweet...
sexual but sweet... maybe i need more sleep.
nice write, now im laughing at myself. -
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You're sweeter than my poems, aren't you, honey?
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Noice work!!! Keep it up!
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LOL I forgot applause!
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You have a way with worls girl, I love to read your poetry. The imagery and passion are wonderful to take in. Good luck!
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I loved it! Short, but extremely sexy and sweet. Even though it does not go into great detail, it still brings to mind hundreds of images... May not be that way for most, but for someone who also shares a love for the female form... Well, it certainly brings back some good memories.
Very well done xx
ps, loving the replies you give people
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hmmm...
You have a very bold sensual character, it reflects all over your poetry giving it a feminine and sexual touch, now how can you resist that?
Flow is great, your usage of simple words only made it more exciting and you are crazy and humorous in a beautiful way!
Keep on doing what you do, good job!
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This was really short... and though I usually don't like short poems, this was very well written and your imagery is just plain fantastic. I enjoyed this and I would love it if something like this were entered into my contest, if only you read the rules and entered.
I enjoyed the entire thing, really... but I'm used to reading long poems--no matter what the genre--and I think that you are a very talented writer and you should just keep up the great work. For the sake of all of us in this Universe, do so.
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Ew!
I'm going to have to give up the extra bacon. This one almost gave me a heart attack. Haha... nice writing.
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dillpickle62
If you want to handle me, you need to take many other things as well...increase your potency, cutie!
Love and kisses!
Galaxy2
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Really sexy write : ) makes me weak with lust. Will sure join you. Xspirt girlX
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DarkSpirit-Girl
I love lust and all the lustful girls. So what are your lustful plans, hottie?
Kisses all over....
Galaxy2
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Write you name, love!
with your tongue
on throbbibg walls
of pleasure zone
Oh, let me moan
Oh, let me scream
My prettiest doll!
My craziest love!
My kinkiest friend!
My sweetest dream!
where do i sign?? -
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blaq roze
If you're a man, sign in my guestbook....if a woman or a girl, my pleasure zone.....and thanks!
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Very sensual write dear Gal. I know that it is a trap for a sexy girl. Yet it captures the sentiments of men too. mmm moaning, and finally screaming... little doll you fill my dream with your thoughts full of cream. I would be happy, if you could spare some time to mark your impressions on my poems.
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Very sensual write dear Gal. I know that it is a trap for a sexy girl. Yet it captures the sentiments of men too. mmm moaning, and finally screaming... little doll you fill my dream with your thoughts full of cream.
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mrajarams
I could make your dreams cum true had you been a girl
Thank you anyway.
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You are making me moan and groan. Your replies to comments are as sexy as you are.
Very Good
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Maxboy
Sorry...to make you moan and groan...
My target was some sweet lady....
but never mind...
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Hmmm cool, this is sexy. I like the exclamation marks and the metaphors with the descriptions. Good job!
~Emily~ xx
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xxforest
Shall I thank you for the comment or shall I tell you about my desire to touch your pretty face, honey?
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WOW!!! Such an intense write in so few lines...I love it!!! The whole poem is excellent!!!...
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voodoo ink
Thank you for reading and appreciating....
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Very nice. The exclamation marks make it a very exciting read, not that it wasn't already I see you've posted a lot more since last I visited your page, and I'm eager to read more!
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JezlsaRos
They are usualy based on experience....Let's wait for the next encounter, honey!...Thanks + Wet kisses!
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Wow
Another one well done my friend...good luck
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Desires-Muse
Thank you, my dear!
Galaxy2
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luv this
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cherrysmile
luv ya, hun!
Galaxy2
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You make me want to take a "Cold Shower"--Well Done & Best of Luck in the Contest!!
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BuriedTreasures
You deserve much more than a cold shower...
Galaxy2
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Wow, very good. I love the feeling you put into this. Great write.
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Sound of Madness
The comment appreciated. Thanks!
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omg girl uve really outdone urself i love ur invitation n i wil RSVP rite away! haha i loved this
good job
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xXcrazychristinaXx
Waiting anxiously with open legs, honey!
Galaxy2
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