Slowly
S l o w l y
F
A
L
L
I
N
G
Down deeper than ever before.
The one she's loved
Held
Kissed
Had pushed her down.
All this time
He had guided her up the ladder
Now
He's pushed her
And burned it up
So she can never return
To what was.
She hits the ground
H A R D
And looks up
To see his face one more time
That was a mistake
Tears and blood
F
A
L
L.
She streches up
Hand as far as it will reach
Blood dripping down
But she doesn't reach far e n o u g h.
He shuts her in
All alone
And closes the door
Never to return.
She's here
With the darkness
And her tears and tainted skin
Never knowing if it's reality
Or not.
She fingers her blade
And she waits
Ever so eagerly
For the one that pushed her down.
Author notes
NO, she's not going ot kill him, she's waiting for him because she loves him. She's waiting even though she knows he's not comming back. Anyway, pretty sloppy, I got bored and wrote it. No idea where it came from, just popped in to say hello. So.. ya...
Comments
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i really really liked this.
He shuts her in
All alone
And closes the door
Never to return.
favorite part^^
my ex did the same thing
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Oh I loved that. Really different. Oh I do that too, just write and a load of blabber comes out.yup, that's what most of my poems are.
I love:
She hits the ground
H A R D
And looks up
To see his face one more time
That was a mistake
Tears and blood
F
A
L
L.
That's really nice the 'HARD' bit really works. I love the way you set it all out.
Nice
x
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aw. thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it
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