situations change in the blink of the eye,
stay on top of things or you'll ge left behind.
This world is not for living, its for leaving.
Time turns hands,
or hands turn time.
And which comes first,
is a matter of mind.
not done.
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smart!
haha i like how youve played with the words here..
time turns hands or hands turn time well both if you think closely dont you think?
yet captivating and so much said in such few words!
smart.tricky.i like it
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good
it sounds great and give the feal of a song. while i read it i kinda sung it in my head. the writing brings it to life
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omgosh!
i think this was perfect! i love the words that you have used here, clever choice, they were like contradi cting each other but your last stanza just wrapped this poem up perfectly! i love this! its stunning! keep penning!
love it! love it! love it!
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:)
thanks.
its part of my semi-luke-warmity series.
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