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Static ( HM )

Lighten a bolt,

Shot in flames,

Passion igniting,

Fills my sky of brilliance, a night.

 

I feel drawn by your static,

magnetic a charge,

Flashing flesh bare,

Lay on open ground.

 

My invitation stands...

 

Leading you to storms of desire,

Slender streaks,

Blond a bomb shell,

Sparks.

 

 

 

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Lightening strikes

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  • onesugar gold member
    July 3, 2008

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    A wonderful erotic passionate take on the prompt
    that was a pleasure to read.
    Thank you for entering and good luck
    ~sugar~


  • Abe 1
    July 2, 2008

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    wow hot me lady hot as burning sparks
    all amazing stanzas
    gd luck me sexy friend of sensuality
    abe


  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 1, 2008

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    Wow, very hot under the covers. Love what you've done with the prompt, superbly penned hunni, good luck


  • Swtpoetryman
    June 30, 2008

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    ONE OF THE BEST PIECES I'VE SEEN IN A LONG, LONG TIME!

    Lighten a bolt,
    Shot in flames,
    Passion igniting,
    Fills my sky of brilliance, a night.

    I feel drawn by your static,
    magnetic a charge,
    Flashing flesh bare,
    Lay on open ground.

    My invitation stands...

    Leading you to storms of desire,
    Slender streaks,
    Blond a bomb shell,
    Sparks.


    I just had to copy and paste this entire piece - as every word is as lovely as any other in it - and they all flow so well - and fit perfectly together - like all of me sweet and sensual mates do when I dream if England! LIGHTENING STRIKES, INDEED! Me? I think i've been hit by LIGHTENING at least twice - right here on AP - once by me bestest mate and the lovely DEEP BLUE EYED LADY who is hosting this contest - and twice when you flashed your HOT LEGS at me! Electricity as powerful and as HOT as that cannot be replicated by man or machine for it is ignited by the heart and the soul! GOOD LUCK in the contest with this one, Julie - which I have to say is me favorite by you - so far - which is saying a lot! Sugar has a way of bringing out the best in people - and it looks like she has done some of her magic with this wonderful contest!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.

    PS - I wasn't only struck by lightening BUT the earth moved beneath from the roar of the thunder, too!


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    June 30, 2008

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    This was erotic, hot, sensual, and in some ways quite dark too. Your imagery here Julie was outstanding. Wonderful writing. Really brought me inside your mind. Well done.

    Darkest
    Love
    Wayne Leon
    xx


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      June 30, 2008
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      All wrapped in one bag .. thank you my Brother
      for your lovely comment x


  • In Too Deep1
    June 30, 2008

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    Oh my! I would never have imagined the sensuality in the essence of bolts themselves, but you have mastered the energy of storm. Beautifully penned and wonderfully creative. A most enjoyable read, and best wishes in the comp


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      June 30, 2008
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      Thank you hun
      Well I can always imagine that storm of passion any day x


  • MysticalRayne
    June 30, 2008

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    ohhhhhhhhhhh hott write here ~ you go ... very nice indeed ~ best of luck in the contest

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