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cipher

 

 

 

to say everything

my mind rambles in silence

i've secluded myself

walked back into a corner

where my dreams hang on a web

forgotten yet not lost

my life... my place

second or last

still not comfortable

in my own breaths {declining}

i can feel you

where my heart skips

...beats...

leaving me grasping for air

breathe for me...

and i'll be no more

your thoughts become mine

my fears become yours

i wait on eternity

reluctant, acceptance

there is nothing more for me

let the fire smoulder

i crave the sweetness of obscurity

sometimes what we want

is not where we belong

and happiness is not always found

where we expect it to be

so i find windowless rooms

and broken hinges on doors

wondering...

will all remain as this

questionless answers

cipher,

this is where i am

 

 

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thanks you to Kj (again) for the title

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i'm still useless

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  • Flower12
    July 29
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    The imagery is exqisite and imaginative. The reality of

  • sandybeaches gold member
    July 28

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    Deep and thoughtful...I love it! These words are so true!
    "sometimes what we want
    is not where we belong
    and happiness is not always found
    where we expect it to be"

    ***Pam***


  • Akimbo silver member
    July 10

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    Wow!

    Ouch! Your new picture alone makes me want to cry. This is sad and beautiful. I love it. I like the way you used the word, "cipher". In some contexts it can be used to mean "less than zero". Perhaps you were using it both ways. I wonder if that might be a suitable title to describe such a melancholy muse. I think this is a a fabulous write already, quit it with the second-guessing... don't make me force another cheer-up note down your throat... cause I'll do it.
    .... Kj


    • LionessK Greeters member
      July 10
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      i love double meanings... if you haven't noticed already.

      i won't make you.


      • Akimbo silver member
        July 10
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        I think your new pic is awesome but quite often they look so sad... which makes me worry. Chin up and all that nonsense, you take care, Kj

        • LionessK Greeters member
          July 10
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          i changed it... a little less sad?
          better?
          don't worry.

  • greyhaime Greeters member
    July 1

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  • Xx Alice xX
    June 30

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    I agree with puppydog, least expected place.
    You know what I went through a couple of years ago, and if it weren't for that I wouldn't have met Ken. And my life is so wonderful now.
    So going through the troubled times does end happily sometimes.
    SMILE
  • Puppydog gold member
    June 30

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    VERY THOUGHTFUL!!!!

    Yes, sometimes a happy feeling or thought comes from the least expected place. Where we thought it would come from comes the exact opposite. Never close ones mind or heart to anything. 's
    One title it may be is - when we least expect-. Just an idea 's


  • greyhaime Greeters member
    June 30
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    I think what you have as a title now works. because it is what ever it is...so much said here, that I can't quite soak it all in, so much to say that I can't mouth the words right..
    I too feel useless....


  • Heavenly Angel
    June 30

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    Oh honey, for this to not be finished, you said a MOUTHFUL!!!
    I think it's just fine as it is; you expressed yourself quite well
    I think we've all felt this way at one point in time or another...
    Wishing you light and love and many hugs,
    Sandy
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