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Thundering Sidewalk

Thundering Sidewalk

By: The Red Cat Jazz of Love

 

 

The winds of bowling up

destruction of slumber thunder,

and the flesh crawling of here I come

to awake you in Pearl Harbor .

Say Yo, Do you understand my español,

the effects of the glow in the death valley clouds

are shallow to the hunt of the bone marrow

that is instinct to the elements of elm street.

Preposterous please,

I sneeze the snot of rain down

and I am laughing with my bangs hanging down

doing harm in a soulless body

while I give birth to the spirits

of taste death female dog and the hell with you!

I will dust you combust the plague flu

to I am the nice she devil witch

Who has came down from light to darkness

to shut down the light switch .

I am graffiti to any many, mighty more

and I have scared you shitless

putting cracks in the thoughts

of your whispering side walk

Metaphors.

 

Julia Clark _ Herring

 

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

 

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  • darell
    July 2, 2008

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    Damn baby..

    could you explain that shit again?
    I'm speechless here sweetie. seems you
    took a ride on the lighting bolts of fury.
    spreading fear in the hearts of the weak
    and feeble. A very explosively expressive write.
    Do you baby. do you.


    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      July 2, 2008
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      thanks gerry i was actually going with the flow of the picture basically describing what type of thunder i am becuase you know when it thunders people tend to get nervous your power outage be disable just my own crazy mind you can say thanks


  • onesugar gold member
    July 1, 2008

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    sí, entiendo su español

    I see my prompt brought out your twisited dark side.

    Loved this, very intense indeed. Loved it from top to drop!

    Fab take on the prompt.

    Thank you for entering and good luck
    ~sugar~

    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      July 1, 2008
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      thanks sug i was asking some one how you spell it hell i cant speak hispanic thanks i will fix it what the other part mean hurry come tell me


  • D Saul So Sexy
    July 1, 2008

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    i like this i think you really did a grat excellen job on this here very much your tabg and swiss very nice god luck


  • Levesta
    July 1, 2008
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    love this sis good luck in the contest

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