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Drowning


There's a scream, then silence all around
Can it be the worlds lost all its sounds
We said Forever,yet really you ment Never.
Here I stand on a suspeneded Bridge
The plan is to end this dreaded teenage life.

At school I am alone and forgotten
the preps make it their goal to were me down,
teachers weren't much better. The hallways are
so lonely and cold.

Misery and pain is all I have ever felt.
You gave me a reason to smile, to laugh
I felt like running for a million miles.
Maybe, I should not have been so trusting
for now I stand here, heart no longer lusting

One minor jump, now water surrounds
Slowly, my mouth opens yet drowning i do quickly.
My last glance toward the bridge, a final plea for help,
I see you standing there, mouth ajar in shock.

Finally I'm free from this hell you call life.
At one time you could have saved me
but now I will be left peacefully.

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  • HolyDemon
    June 30, 2008
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    AMAZING!!!

    I can picture it. Iz just pure poetry. I love it. Your magnificent.


    • Emo-Juggalette
      June 30, 2008
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      thx, i don't plan to put any light spirited ones on here at all so yha.