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Surrender


Acknowledgement of powerlessness didn't change a thing


-externally-


because admitting a fact is true doesn't mean it was once false.

But that one decision to admit that things had gone completely


-beyond my control-


turned surrender into a solution to the morass of my life

and gave me a rock to stand on in a river swollen with chaos.


-Serenity-


comes from letting go of the past and living life the way it is;

instinctively doing the right thing regardless of the cost, and bringing


-hope-


to a soul that had forgotten the meaning and the power of that word.





Author notes

Those who know what I am talking about will appreciate the words; those who don't.....well, I hope you never have to know.

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  • jackreed3
    July 8, 2008

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    That desearved Gold ... my Friend...
    This is a Great Write... It just might save a soul or
    someones life...
    I have Been there... JackReed3... your friend in
    Poetry...


  • creationsfromheart
    July 1, 2008

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    thank you for this entry this speaks loud and clear and to be honest offers so much to anyone whom has ever made a decision that was so hard. I am not crazy about the stanza it is written in but for this one it is all about the words good luck.


  • pantress
    June 30, 2008
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    And I hope I never have to either


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    June 30, 2008

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    Coming to terms with things and letting go is very hard.
    Extreme emotions...

    Thanks for sharing and all the best...

    Sue