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The Keyhole

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 she wept sulfur tears

 over the deceptions
 they whispered her.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Shadow Lynx
    August 10, 2008
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    good job!

    congratz on gold with this amazing dark write


  • Fourthaxis
    July 1, 2008

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    Wow, that's pretty powerful. Loved the use of 'sulphur' for the rusting....Amazing!!
    Peace!
    Anansey


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    June 30, 2008

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    this is so beautifully done with deep emotions and I adore the metaphors. you have caught this amazingly well done hun


  • Darkwell
    June 30, 2008
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    i love this an how the tears r sulpher that stain her an it fits the pic great WTG!


  • Lady Eventide
    June 30, 2008

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    Oooh.... sad and freaky (in a way).... definitely didn't see this coming! Excellent work. Good luck.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    June 30, 2008
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    This is freaking sad


  • Luckintheshadows
    June 30, 2008

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    ooooh, brilliantly dark write!!! excellent take on the prompt.

    Thanks for sharing this,

    Luck.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 30, 2008
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    Oh good and sad. Nice work.


  • SweetNessaLynn
    June 30, 2008
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    Wow! I love this take on the prompt. Best of luck.

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