Shrieking-shouting
going insane
Dancing-singing
in the rain!
Jumping-splashing
in the puddle...
singing-shouting
forming huddles.
Rosy girls form groups
and play ring-a-roses,
While tiny boys trip along
with ruddy noses.
When granny comes out,
clutching a towel,
fussing and scolding
one and all...
The elder kids stroll
hands in hands.
As the rain-drops carelessly caress,
the light brown sand.
Sprightly rain-
pattering all day...
making things so beautiful...
so bright...so gay...
Author notes
just a mere thought......
Please tell me what you think
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Hey mekhala.... you wrote a great poem... it was really very nice.... i loved it
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thanks honey...really kind of you...
luv ya loadz
mekhala(lucy)
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This is a wonderful write.
A very lively presentation of the rains.
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I loved it. I can just paint a picture of this in my head and it brings back not so distant memories of how much fun puddles and rain can be. It was just so lively and fun and definetely put a smile on my face. Great job!
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Thank you so much
...I am so glad that you liked it!!!
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Very good Mekhala. Nicely done.
Thanks for sharing.
Love Uncle Brian -
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Thank you so much Uncle...I am so glad you liked it!!!
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a very happy and bright poem! nicely done!!!
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a very happy and bright poem! nicely done!!!
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Thanks so much!!! I am glad you liked it...
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Good write
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Thank you so much! I am so glad you liked it!
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You welcome
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