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Metamorphosis

Missing image

A butterfly emerging,

Cells connecting as one.

An outcast of religion,

Its time has come.

 

 

Awakening the matter on the right,

From its sleep.

Surrounded by chaos,

It steps out of the deep.

 

 

Searches for a cell,

Alike to connect.

Through the eye of the spirit,

Butterfly effect.

 

 

Matter persists,

To eat it alive.

But the imaginal cells,

Continue to thrive.

 

 

Ghandhi, Aquino,

Kennedy and King;

Carriers of imaginal,

Spirits supreme

 

 

Resonating a new frequency,

Bringing consciousness to mankind.

Pulling cells towards destiny,

Universe aligned.

 

Author notes

MY BELIEFS' What the caterpillar calls the end of the world the master calls a butterfly.(Richard Bach) THE CELLS ARE HUMANITY, (SPIRITUALISM) OUTCAST OF RELIGION.THE MATTER ON THE RIGHT IS THE RIGHT SIDE OF THE BRAIN,THE CHAOS IS STEPPING OUTSIDE THE BOX (CHANGE). CONNECTING TO EACH OTHER BECAUSE OF OUR BELIEFS RATHER THEN CREATING CONFLICTS BECAUSE OF OUR DIFFERENCES.THE CONFLICT IS THE MATTER BECAUSE WHAT WE PERCEIVE WITH OUR SENSES AND WHAT WE CAN FEEL WITH OUR SOUL.
CREATES A CONFLICT WITHIN US AND WITHIN HUMANITY.GOD BLESS...

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  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    November 2
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    Very nice visuals here.. Loved the read


  • humblpye gold member
    October 14

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    You have spoken well, this whole verse resonates with everything I have always believed instinctively and known...thank you for sharing this, and most importantly the notes of explanation are amazing...right side of the brain huh!
    Yes yes yes...all of it and more, we have only scratched the surface...I decided this morning to look you up, I'm so glad I did
    Truly an excellent work my dear friend, I will bookmark it
    Yours is not a God with a long grey beard sitting atop a drifting cloud is he...
    No maam, you know who He is and He knows who you are for sure!
    John


  • rite
    August 26

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    The spirits mentioned on your poem to some level synchronized with the universal frequency of love. 528 Hz. We give what we receive and attempt to focus on adjusting our filters to give meaning to our stay in this plain. Congratulations on the wins with this well conceived write. Thanks for creating and sharing. Take care.


  • penman gold member
    July 18

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    Excellent

    Wow, such an amazing write. So very creative and so deserving of all the trophies. Congratualtions


  • Andre ben-YEHU
    July 17

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    Good work...




    I have enjoyed reading of "Metamorphosis" for its contents and subject dealt.

    "Metamorphosis" strikes the learning mind, and revives the thoughts of many philosophical schools.

    I salute You, Poet.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    May 28
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    wow a stunningly good helping of food for thought
    thanks so very much for sharing this
    t


  • drifting cloud silver member
    May 12
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    This is a fantastic poem. I think I my put it in my list of friend's poems, if ok.


  • l33t-n1nj4
    August 23, 2008

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    This was beautifuly written and works amazingly. An eye opening and thought sparking work. AWSOME JOB!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 6, 2008
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    Awesome write here

    This is trukly a great piece of work you spent some time on this one


  • ultimate beluga
    August 3, 2008
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    this is a really thought-provoking piece... an interesting take on the prompt. the flow and rhythm was, in parts, too bare and simplistic for me, but it worked brilliantly for the final stanza. great ending there!
    this is a really interseting look at humanity. its good to read substance.
    thanks heaps for entering (:

  • wendymolly
    July 24, 2008

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    'd this very much!!! ...and for that you are a contest finalist! Good Luck!
    take care always,
    ~pithyAplomB.


  • nature mithya
    July 15, 2008
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    Bronze

    ‘Evolution is beautiful. Overlooking the faults as nature’s genetics never fail


  • Luckintheshadows
    July 10, 2008

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    Excellent. I love the neat, powerful stanzas of this poem, your imagery and flow are really good, and you convey alot of meaning with heach word.

    Thank you so much for sharing this and for taking the time to enter my contest,

    Luck.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 10, 2008

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    your immagery is indeed a flawless task...well done..and my thanks for sending such a beautiful piece in my contest...


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    July 8, 2008
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    wonderful flow and word usage

    this piece is kind of hard to read though because of the font color


  • Poetry-and-rhyme
    July 6, 2008

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    auntiee you are splendido and marvelous i miss your words your love your care and your guidance
    i liked how you had this poem all the way pennned
    lovely work
    lovely auntie
    lvoe you


  • peridotPixi
    July 2, 2008

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    wow i really love the wonderful thoughts and feelings you have put into this deep poem i love how things are emerging from everywhere, thank you for the wonderful entry to our contest and as always keep up the beautiful writing ~Amy


  • reeseXtheXsoldier
    July 2, 2008
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    i love this

    kudos and thanks for entering!


  • Missa
    July 2, 2008
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    OMG! it was sooooo good! i loved it!


  • ourgirlFriday
    July 1, 2008

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    Holy Cow!

    What a poem! If this doesn't impress the judge, they're blind. You are bound to win! (Unless they have an unspoken/unwritten grudge on religion-I've run into a few like that.) Best of luck to you!


  • Nicada silver member
    July 1, 2008

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    This is a beautiful and unique write you have penned here. Some wonderful imagery of the formation of a butterfly but with some deeper meanings about life for us humans. Nice! Blessings, Patty

  • goalsv
    June 30, 2008
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    Very well done, a great discriptive write. Loved the metephoric look at the life of a butterfly.


  • Trent plus pen
    June 30, 2008

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    Excellent!

    This is the kind of stuff I was looking for!
    Well done!

    I love this stanza:
    "Matter persists,
    To eat it alive.
    But the imaginal cells,
    Continue to thrive."

    Really brings home the life of our butterfly.

    Good luck in my contest!
    Trent.


  • HellRaiser21
    June 30, 2008
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    Very interesting, good write. The poem is perfect for the idea.

  • Ace - LightWithinMe
    June 30, 2008

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    Hello (won't say your name as this is in a contest).

    This is a nice write, touches on chaos theory and the butterfly effect. However this to me speaks of spiritual transformation, a change; an elevation in consciousness. It also speaks to the battle it faces as the flesh/ego looks to bring it back down. A good write, abstract than more compared to your other writes I have read.

    I wish you well in the contest. My regards.


  • Puppydog gold member
    June 30, 2008
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    VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    Beautiful and soothing words my dear friend. 's

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