Like a mirage what binds to the naked eye
is only a mere illusion of the reality that
hides behind caged mind.
Author notes
Picture credit unknown.
Let your minds flow within the wording of this.
for reality is the key.
A contest entry
- Unusal Pic Prompt IV by Carolina Moon.
450 points, ended July 3, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful
Very creative and well expressed. Thank you for sharing.
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excellent~
What an unusual pic
I think you have done a wonderful job here with the prompt and the pic...
Love the pic it's so very very different....
The imagery you described is excellent...and to me this would of been a winner in a book.....
Fantastic sweetie
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Short but sweet. A great take on the prompt in my opinion. Nice write!
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You said it! Wonderfully done. Thank you for your entry.
Linda
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Nicely said.
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