He has struck with merciless force,
Creating great panic and fear
Among those who defy Him.
He strikes when you don't expect it.
His message is clear to those
Who don't believe His word:
Take cover immediately,
For The Wrath of God is unforgiving.
A contest entry
- Lightning Strikes by onesugar.
925 points, ended July 3, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great stuff....
Less is more, so much said in so few words...
It put me in mind of a 'Family Guy' quote. Stewie sits reading the Bible 'I love this God fellow, he's so delightfully evil' LOL!
Needless to say 'I love it'
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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AWww this is deinatly a write that would make one think and ponder nicely written,
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Powerful piece you have written here my friend. Wonderful emotion too you have caught. You have created great imagery here which runs throughout the piece. Well done indeed. And, congratulations on your trophy.
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Wishes
Wayne Leon
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You have painted here a wonderful picture of the wrath of God...you're words are so true the ending saying it all.
Good luck in the contest and thank you for entering
~sugar~
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Great Write
Hello Jaime, Yes the wrath of God is unforgiving. He is a patient God but will strike evil down in a heartbeat. Thank you for sharinmg your thoughts. A nice way to start my day. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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