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by the sea

platinum smoothness reminds the soul
of antiquity's lust to survive the
windy sea and become its landmark
to enduring nature

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  • Lotus-Mama
    June 30, 2008

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    Windy sea.....platinum smoothness reminds the soul
    of antiquity's lust to survive.....

    Your delicate use of language is exquisite! Beautiful take on the prompt, thanks for entering!!!


  • MysticalRayne
    June 30, 2008
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    Beautiful piece ~ best of luck in the contest


  • MichaelBe
    June 30, 2008

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    Wow, a great piece! Four immensely deep and powerful lines here; nice write. Good luck in contest..

    Michael