Eyes gaze off in the distance,
past the setting sun.
There is beauty and such purity,
when each day is done.
The magic of the moonlight,
will soon be at bay.
Overshadowing the splendor ,
of this passing day.
Sun sets where he waits for me,
bringing warmth of love.
Drifts to him on sunbeams soft,
feathered wings of dove.
Fiery crimsom for passion felt,
thoughts of sheer delight.
Specks of gold caress horizon,
day turns into night.
Heavenly, to sooth the sense,
behold day's afterglow.
Filled with love so intense,
beaming down below.
Author notes
Background by Errant Panther
In a list
A contest entry
- WARM SUNSETS by TwilightPanther.
700 points, ended July 15, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow :)
that is a beautiful poem it gave me a happy feeling of love when i felt down thank you
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This is the kind of day I need to watch fade on the horizon. The images surround the mind with tingling warmth to share the sense engulfed by the shadows called in the night with star filled sky. Poetry is born as a new orb in the sky. Lovely rhyme and transition between stanza to keep this memorable and fresh. Good luck in the contest (I think this is well deerving of trophy).
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with each word of beauty you hold this reader captive and pull the sighs straight from the heart...Just a breath taking read
thank you so much for sharing that beautiful heart with me and for entering
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Wonderful Comment
Well hello Anne, Niaish for the nice comment and for being you. Your friendship is a treasure to me and so many others. You take care.
Blessings,
Sandy
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~sigh~
Your poem has melted my heart Sweet Sandy as the sunset and romance washes over me and brings a smile to my face
Beautifully penned hun
Best of luck
♥
Stay safe
Love to you
~Manda
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Lovely Comment
Bless you Amanda. Hope you and David are okay. My thoughts and prayers are always with you both. Many hugs and Smiles. God Bless You.
Love You,
Sandy
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You excel in this write as all your others. Imagery and your analogy of the sun being just like a lover that is waiting for you, and leaves the afterglow of their presence...Well sis, you have done it again! Knocked us off our feet! Bravo!
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Hello Rose!!!
So nice to hear from you. Hope your day is going well. Bless you my dear sis. Hugs and Smiles
Sandy
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As far as the eye can see, it was HIS world that he created with such love and wonder. Your poem is breathtaking, every stanza speaks of love. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.
~Sie
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Wonderful Comment.
Thank you Sie for reading and commenting. Take care.
Blessings,
Sandy
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God never travles
That he dowen't leave His beauty behing to see where He has been.....mac
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Bless You Mac
Your comments are so nice to read. I enjoy when you stop by. You take care. Many Hugs and Smiles. Bless you always, Sandy
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VERY LOVELY!!!!
There is something very special about a sunset, it has a beauty all of its own and spreads hope and beauty to all who stop and watch it.
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THANK YOU A BUNCH KEVIN, HUGS AND SMILES!!!!!
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I read your sunset, warm and tender
The way you end your day
The lovely setting that you render
Sets my mind at play
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Rread your comment,it made me smile
For you wrote your words in rhyme
So glad you stopped by for a while
I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Well thank you Jeff. I so enjoyed your comment. You take care and have a nice day or evening, depending where you are. 
Sandy
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Bravo!
Another fine poem. Lovely imagery & setting. Just dandy.
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Great Comment!!!!
Thank you Jaime. Another very nice comment. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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really good, wow amazing.
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Very Nice Comment!!! Thank you for stopping by and reading. You take care. Sandy
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very very nice thick with imagery my Dear Lady,
great way to bring the heat of the sun to the page tee hee.
Love and Light
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Lovely Comment!!!
Hello Tearz, So nice to read a comment from you. You take care. Always, Sandy
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