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~ Twilight's Kiss~



Mind mixed with Kaleidoscope thoughts
tiny tingles mixing with heart that beats
like thunder.
Lost in emotions only a first love could
be lost within.


( I inhale )


Lips twitch as your soft spray of
tiny kisses explore my pink lips
as urgency becomes apparent.


( I exhale )

Suffocating in the exploration
of first kiss as tongue meets tongue
reveling in the wonders of our
first kiss.


Author notes

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But ooh how it speaks.

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  • Lily Skie gold member
    August 15

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    This is adorable. ^___^ It makes me think of my boyfriend haha Although he isn't, I pretend he was my first kiss. :]

    "Mind mixed with Kaleidoscope thoughts
    tiny tingles mixing with heart that beats
    like thunder.
    Lost in emotions only a first love could
    be lost within."

    Oh so true. I like "Kaleidoscope thoughts" ^_^ And "heart that beats like thunder".

    "Lips twitch as your soft spray of
    tiny kisses explore my pink lips
    as urgency becomes apparent."

    This made me smile ^_^ Your poem goes well with the picture. :] A well deserved trophy.







    -Lily♥


  • Black Narcissus silver member
    August 6
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    That was lovely


  • Tender wolf gold member
    July 15

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    O my how you do take the breath away...yum! niaish so much for sharing this most wonderful kiss and for entering


  • Ruby34
    July 3
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    Wonderful entry to the contest..best of luck
    Ruby