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Life is Just

Life is just a vase of flowers
We sit there bored for hours and hours
Or really is a bucket and spade
Throw in there a hand gernade
Or maybe like a bedroom wall
Particularly nothing in common at all

The message here
Is far from near
Nothing as good
As a bottle of beer

The message is just a simple thought like:
'An elephant never forgets, but i forgot what the elephant remembered'
A thought so dear
its not very clear;

Can YOU figure it out???

('cos i cant!) 

just thought up off the tip of my tounge!!!

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  • Bob Fox
    February 7

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    Lol

    I like this and that bottle of berr can taste mighty fine. But again there is much to ponder in your witty write poet.


  • peridotPixi
    June 30, 2008

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    this is really cool, i never thought as life a vase of flowers, i love the feeling and the details you have used in this poem, this is great for an off the tip of your tounge thing, keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy