Life is just a vase of flowers
We sit there bored for hours and hours
Or really is a bucket and spade
Throw in there a hand gernade
Or maybe like a bedroom wall
Particularly nothing in common at all
The message here
Is far from near
Nothing as good
As a bottle of beer
The message is just a simple thought like:
'An elephant never forgets, but i forgot what the elephand remembered'
A thought so dear
its not very clear;
Can YOU figure it out???
('cos i cant!)
A contest entry
- Open to all poets on Allpoetry apart from Winklings folk #102 by Lyndon.
3500 points, ended July 9, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
just thought up off the tip of my tounge!!!
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lol
I love this. There is nothing like a little humor to brighten up the day and this is excellent poet. I need to reread it and get another good chuckle.
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thnx lols xx
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I am always so pleased to see our younger members join in the contests. You have expressed in rhyme, those tough thought on growing up and restlessness of an unknown future.
Personally, I don't know if we ever really figure it all out.
Check this a bit for typos - scond 'elephant' needs a correction. Just run it through a spell checker if you can and that should take care of much.
Rhyme is steady and your opening lines set the stage of frutration quite well.
Keep that ink flowing. I am pleased to see this entry here. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela
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This is wonderful! It made me smile... I like your rhyme ant the images were vivid and not expected.
"Throw in there a hand gernade" LOL
Well done, thank you for entering our contest.
Love,
Amera♥
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hey lols thnx love the dancin gal pic by the way!!!! lol xxx
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