I give myself to you sweet moon
I give myself to you
For in this world, I took a life
And now I can't go on.
So take me to a better place
Where life is sweet and pure.
And to you now I hear by swear
I'll never kill no more.
Author notes
Credit to Midnightsykes for the picture which is so pretty. xxx
A contest entry
- PIF - Picture Prompt by LadyDementia.
900 points, ended July 1, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Lovely
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awww thanks, hopefully get to know more people soon, i have been on a while at least i signed up a long time ago, but then my comp went down so have only recently been able to start using it lol.
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I love how this flows, you have worked well on the rhythm/meter
I like sweet and pure
Hope you do well
Good luck
Cind
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yea a comment, i guess this site is very close and if your new you just get ignored, been to sites like that before, i guess i will just have to get to know some people.
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Welcome to the site as you go round reading and commenting, people will see your here and comment back. May take a while to settle in but its a very friendly place
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Wonderful take on the picture, love your train of thought. Thanks for your entry and good luck :)
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gor and i thought this was one of my better ones but i aint got a single comment
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