The one who knows my song so well
breathed life into my soul,
understanding every thought
even when I lose control.
He knows me so well in and out
the only one who ever will,
for He knows each step from first to last
unconditionally loves me still.
When I've forgotten who I am
or which path I need to travel,
I say a prayer for truth to come
and the puzzle He unravels.
His words breathe softly through my soul
bestowing inner peace,
once more my song is filled with strength
and the doubts are all released.
The one friend I can truly trust
my creator is the one,
for love so precious and wonderful
can be compared to none.
Author notes
Quote - 'a friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words...' mcjun
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A contest entry
- when... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 4, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful scenario you haver sketched to reveal the depth of the friendship..I love this wonderful piece..we3ll done...
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Excellent
Another incredible creation from you pen. So very well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.
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wonderful write!
Nifty!
God, the Creator, is the only friend who will never let us down and knows us better than anyone, better than we know ourselves! Superb Write!
God Bless,
ZeInkslinger
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this is so beautiful an your so lucky to have some body that does know you like that an that you can trust
His words breathe softly through my soul
bestowing inner peace,
once more my song is filled with strength
and the doubts are all released.
i love that stanza an a real friend can do that an calm you when stuff is all crazy
WTG!!!
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