Walking through this darkness
Not knowing what to do
I'm thinking about the past
When there was me and you
I'm alive but I'm alone
So I might as well be dead
I'm walking blindly through this life
Not knowing what's ahead
Remembering how you got under my skin
And saw right through my smile
The pain I felt was underneath
That had been there for awhile
I just hope you know
That even though I'm gone
A part of me is still fighting it
But most of me is done
Author notes
3 Doors Down
When I'm Gone lyrics
When your education x-ray cannot see under my skin,
I won't tell you a damn thing that I could not tell my friends.
Now roaming through this darkness,
I'm alive but I'm alone,
Part of me is fighting this but part of me is gone.
A contest entry
- Come Join The Dark Side by Re-invention.
1376 points, ended July 17, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
~ I take constructive criticism~
Comments
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dude that really good!!!
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I hear you and a very good write
I hear many including my nephew who has become like jekal and hide for the cocaine has taken a very young man and made him look from age 25 to age 50 in a short time . I fear that if he oesnt get help and move from where he is living it will take over his mind completly . I pray for his return everyday and always feel within my heart together we will find a way
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wow.. loved it nicely put baby!
jk... you did a great job really the rhyme was simple and nice... very well done!
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3 Doors Down
When I'm Gone lyrics
When your education x-ray cannot see under my skin,
I won't tell you a damn thing that I could not tell my friends.
Now roaming through this darkness,
I'm alive but I'm alone,
Part of me is fighting this but part of me is gone.
any part of the song is ok i just like that part.. thanks for entering and goood luck in contest!
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