[i miss you less and less with each breath, it's almost impossible to breath again]
Somewhere far, far away, near the rainbows
Yet under the star; higher than the mountains
There will be a river that runs through a park
A park of multiple colors and multiple rides,
Bubbles will float by and feet will float on the grass.
Children will laugh, children will play,
Swings Will go higher than any star.
No reason to fear life or people,
Pain is a dream, heartbreak obscure,
Nothing can touch you here.
Alone in this park of guaranteed happiness,
Alone, alone, you'll never feel pain.
You're safe amongst the bubbles,
Make friends with that bumble bee.
Learn to laugh, forget to love,
Pretend you're six, smile again.
Breathe in the leaves, breathe out the angst.
Tomorrow may never come, so swing ad
Swing, try to grab that shinning star.
Home will become a dream
You just have to want this to be your reality
Author notes
this was the original to the other poem i entered in to your contest doll so i figured i should enter this one too. ily bby.
A contest entry
- [cheer me up] by whiterabbit..
400 points, ended September 7, 2008, 36 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - DirtyPretty - Prewrites or Fresh by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended July 30, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Excellent poem Danc, I love the imagery created here, well done, a marvellous piece. So magical, and floaty, and just wonderful. All the bubbles and lush green and rivers - gorgeous
. Good luck in the contest
best wishes as always
Autumn Whisper
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very intense, love the imagery that is captivated in this, so strong and expressive, I can definately relate to to this, it gives me an inner calm.
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I love this bby. I can't pick which one I like best. I love the descriptions of everything and the way that everything is so fantasy-like, yet so real that i can picture and feel everything.
♥
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