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My whispered wish

Missing image


he sits on the shore
of Lake Superior

whispering thoughts
of coming back
on waves of hope

I shall return





Author notes

I visited Thunder Bay, Canada last year and scattered all over the landscape are little stone monuments like the one in the picture. Thank you for bringing such lovely memories back to me.

Picture Prompt ~ http://suomyno.deviantart.com/art/Leaving-our-mark-90189749

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  • everhopeful
    July 25, 2008
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    wonderful sis...reminds me of our time together as well. Can't wait to have you back here


  • Swan song gold member
    July 5, 2008
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    LOL this was really good as always you are awesome!!!!


  • marlene47 silver member
    July 2, 2008
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    Douglas Mac Arthur leaves the Philippines and goes to Lake Superior... clever.
    Marlene


  • Lotus-Mama
    June 30, 2008

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    whispering thoughts
    of coming back
    on waves of hope...


    this is a stunning 9 words!!!! absolutely amazing!!!

    beautiful write!! thanks for entering!!



  • Randomly Beautiful
    June 30, 2008
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  • Cannonsfire
    June 30, 2008

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    I think I seen those stones somewhere before Love, C
    Oh my mistake it was covered by a blue tutu!!! LMAO...

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