Soul alive with fascination
as I bathe in your admiration
Your love, my favourite contemplation
when together, there's never a limitation
From sweetest lips, this kiss, I'll savour
oh, how I pine to stay in your favour
This tingling feeling, I pray, will linger
as I trace love, on your nose with a finger
You run a hand down my dress, so shadowy-lined
soft satin caresses the floor, tonight our hearts will be entwined
Many decadent treats, ours to share
embracing, we finally answer each others prayers.
as I bathe in your admiration
Your love, my favourite contemplation
when together, there's never a limitation
From sweetest lips, this kiss, I'll savour
oh, how I pine to stay in your favour
This tingling feeling, I pray, will linger
as I trace love, on your nose with a finger
You run a hand down my dress, so shadowy-lined
soft satin caresses the floor, tonight our hearts will be entwined
Many decadent treats, ours to share
embracing, we finally answer each others prayers.
Author notes
me and my awesome friend Sailor, wrote this together
mine are Italic..and well she also changed a word or two in my part aswell
Great fun, thanks darl..hope its adored
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I Just Loved This
This is a wonderful poem and I love the rhyme and imagery so sensually sweet.
This tingling feeling, I pray, will linger LOL
Yeh me too LOL
Much Love
Aunty Kelle


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Thanks Aunty Kelle...I hope it lingers for you too
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awww you two rovk and you have written an amazing and beautifully written piece. I love how you have pieced it together. ewll done
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yay!! we so mesh well

Bravo to us
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oh so do hehe, fun times

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awww sweetitude

awesomness
love ya
peace

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hehe Thanks SiSsy


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