Amoung dark clouds
Her eyes are the storm
Watching life down below
Binding fingers
Let there fury rain down
Dancing lights come alive
Lightning her only friend
Passion roams her heart
The burning skies
Scar her own soul
Melting anger
Roars the skies
Her feelings are set free
Crashing Dager
Scars the land
A symbol of pain
She suffers inside herself
Screaming echoes rain inside
Binded clouds
Eyes of suttlness
Send waves of tears
To make the thunder
She makes her own
Stars dance
Stars of sorrow
Alone in her thunder domain
Rain will fall
In eternal bloom
A contest entry
- Lightning Strikes by onesugar.
925 points, ended July 3, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Does it sound okay?
Comments
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This was a pleasure to read - beautifully dark.
Thank you for entering and good luck
~sugar~
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