Key turning in on a closed door,
Churning sickness watching time,
Silently in rooms I tread,
Corridors over crowded pushing through,
Battling emptiness,
Shard of glass,
Once a beating heart,
Lost of all emotions,
Surrender.
Author notes
When love finally died... and then a decision was made
Took another two years.. but now I have moved on
Happy and free to be me again
A contest entry
- Hardest Decision Made by creationsfromheart.
425 points, ended July 1, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great poem here
Filled with such emotion of the walk we all take at some time to find our way back to the one who loves us most .Ourselves and as we embrace this peace of mind and self care w know we are finaly on the way back to happiness indeed
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Brilliant julie ... its also brilliant youve moved on
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wow ! i love this ! i especially love the second line, for some reason... congrats on the gold ! well deserved !
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congrats on de gold Reptile Lady
ace sad amazin and brill
no wonder the top notch for a top poem
abe
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Beautiful composition--Excellently versed--Well deserving of the Gold---Well Done!!
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this is so wonderfully exspressed in so few words I adore this write and thank you for entering!
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Thank you Susan
I am delighted you adored my poem, which was so honest
and deep for me to write.
And for the Gold xxx
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Excellent Write Good Luck in Sissies Contest Mum
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Thanks Cara xx
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Its tough being alone in a croud. Theres a song by Bobby Goldsburo that says " A man withought love is only half of a man. But a woman is nothing at all".
Very sad , very good write.
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Thank you...
I remember the singer and will check out the lyrics of the song.
It can be tough alone in the crowd.
x
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A lot of emotions in this wonderful piece of work sis. I think a lot of us have shared these same feelings with you. Love you and good luck.
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We have sis xx
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julie how deep your words do paint raw emotions of the reality of love dying it is hard in life if we fall out of love but it is so much better to move forward and be happy and free to become the missing linc of ourselves again
I can relate to the following lines they are brilllant
Key turning in on a closed door,Churning sickness watching time,Battling emptiness,Shard of glass,Lost of all emotions,Surrender.good luck in the comntest my friend take care
marina
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Yes it is , and I am me, the one who was lost and could not be found xx thanks you
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Will you stop writing about my life!
This rings so true to me too Julie
one of the hardest decisions I ever had to make
and hope I never have to do again.
It is so liberating to be able to be me again
Good luck with this hon.
~sugar~
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We seem often to mirror our lives
I hope not to do this again myself
and again I mirror being me again.
The children came first, and although they still do, they are growing up, and I can really move forward xxx
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I know where you are coming from with this. I wrote something similar. This is thought-provoking and powerful and you can feel the fear of that key going in the lock.
You know what is coming next. And the imagination of the reader does the rest. Fantastic, and yet deeply-sad piece. Your emotions are all but gone now for the person who had done those things to you.
Dark
Love
Wayne Leon
xx
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Yes that key ! wow I feared that one ...
but its over, and I have moved onwards and living again
Thank you xxx
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this was such a sorrowful write.. Yet it had strength in it as well.. the strength to write it.. I really loved this hun.. You did a wonderful job.. Best of luck..
Angel
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Strength was my weakness it then became my strength
Forward I say, past is laid to rest xxx
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