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still living, because I can't leave

when you knew about me thinking about killing myself
you asked me if I would write a suicide note
but she never knew that I almost killed myself once
and that I already had that note, written just for her

I was so glad I didn't died that night
cause I might have one friend,
but if that's what I have to hold on to,
then I will keep on holding on for her

and everyday is getting brighter
but I don't want her to worry about me
so I'll be a fighter against suicide and depression these days
so I can finally live and feel free

thank God that there are people called FRIENDS!! even if you have one friend, hold on to it, you can't let friends down!

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  • Living-Nightmare
    July 1, 2008

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    wow i love this peice of writing... it makes me think of the night i almmost killed myself..and trust me it was a bad idea to get help because i dwell on the fact that everyone would be better off without me...but enough about me your poem has great emotion...keep writing and if you ever want to talk im here...


  • the.art.of.drowning
    July 1, 2008

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    beautiful poem! i love it. i know how you feel sbout the whole suicide thing. i nearly did once too. but the difference is i am not glad i didn't. i love this poem good work!


  • black-tears
    July 1, 2008
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    I totally agree, you can't just leave someone who cares about you....
    thanks darlin I will survive xD

  • Zannah
    June 30, 2008

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    Even if you only have one person to live for its still a pretty damn good reason to live. Plus if you died i would miss visiting your page and reading your wonderful poetry =] Hang in there my friend.

    Zannah