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Mortal Embraces

A sifting dream
The twilight
Somewhat unreal

Beautiful lies
Wondrous truths
A soft walk
Beyond hard reality

Immortal here in this
Mortal ways of life
Seeming to just fade
Drifting farther away

In a soft embrace
Wandering softly
Lost in my passion
Clarity far behind

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What Romance feels like.

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  • Angelflower
    July 7, 2008

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    This was so soft.. I really loved the imagery you painted here.. The emotion that you expressed was wonderful.. You really did a wonderful job with romance.. This was beautiful.. thank you verymuch for sharing.. best of luck.

    Angel