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Thought Bubbles

Thoughts bubble
in my mind,
as I face the problem
of which of the many
to pin my faith on.

Alas, I find that
pinning anything  to bubbles
quickly depletes their number
until, eventually,
only one will be left;

large, proud
and rotundly unburst,
waiting for me
to explore its contents
in order to write this.

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  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    July 20, 2008

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    This is an awesome poem. I never thought that a bubble is what held all our thoughts. I really like the concept. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.