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Rhyming In bed

On my bed I rest my head..
The tears that seep will always call,
To someone who will help me when I stumble,
I know that it's not how hard you fall
But how soft you land, yet I wonder who
Will be there in the end..

On my bed I rest my head..
Waking from my dream of what could have been..
Or what would have been, if only I could have let my heart beat..

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Lol.. well what can I say I was bored and feeling lonely

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  • KayJay46 gold member
    June 30
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    Beautiful and mournful... a lovely penning of your feelings...
    Ken


  • maralisa silver member
    June 30

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    oh you have painted some raw sad emotions within this poem we all feel sad and lonely at some point within ourlifes but we have the courage to choose how we are feeling and pick ourselfes up and start all over again I wise you lots of love and courage to take your pain away

  • Aww sad! But emotions many of us feel at times!
    We all need that soft place to land!


  • Sending s your way Angel... I do know how you feel hun. Juls


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    June 30
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    Oh such sad words Angel, c'mere and I'll give you a pillow and read you a bedtime story


    • Angelflower Greeters member
      June 30
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      Lol.. meanie Lol. I haven't had a story read to me in forever

      • Cannonsfire silver member
        June 30
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        Once upon a time was a beautiful blue Angel, she was blue because she was all alone, she was looking for a beautiful boy Angel to come rescue her and fluff up her pillows and take up space in the bed...

        • Angelflower Greeters member
          June 30
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          The Angel gets a boy Angel?!! Really!?! wow!! what happens next !!!

          • Cannonsfire silver member
            June 30
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            The lovely blue Angel talked to the sparrows about who she wanted and the deer and the squirrels all listened to her pleas. She would look up into a starlit night and sigh to the stars...stars that shine so white and bright, find me a boy I can love tonight...and the little stars smiled and they knew she was lonely, a big house and a big empty bed...so they began sprinkling their stardust all over the place searching for that perfect boy Angel to be by her side, so she would smile and laugh like she used to do....

            • Angelflower Greeters member
              June 30
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              And did they find him?!!! Did her wish come true?!

              • Cannonsfire silver member
                June 30
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                Their stardust settled on a remote mountaintop, covered in white and pure snow, there it dusted the head of a blond young man tending to his roses growing amongst the cold. The stars said to him..dear angel are you not lonely up here on this mountain, tending roses?? The young man turned his beautiful face to the sky and shook his head...No little stars I have my beautiful roses and they grace the snow, if I were not here who would look after them when the frosts come and the wind blows their petals so...The stars conferred between each other then turned to the honest young man and said...what if we said there was someone as lovely as your roses, waiting in the valley below...she is yearning for someone to show her the beauty in the world and I think you can.

              • Cannonsfire silver member
                June 30
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                Lol hang on!!!!

                • Cannonsfire silver member
                  June 30
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                  LAST PART

                  He followed the stars blazing light from his mountain to where the lovely blue angel was sitting in her garden, he frowned for it had no roses and many weeds. She looked shocked as he enter through her gate but he put a hand up and said 'do not be afraid little one, I come because the stars asked me too' The blue Angel's face softened, she thought him handsome and she smiled back at him 'I have nothing to offer you here, I am alone'
                  He laughed and held out his hand 'Ah then let me show you where beauty lives' he took her by the hand and drew her to him and kissed her lovingly on her cheek. She blushed furiously and he lifted her chin saying 'The beauty is in your heart dear angel and if you will let me I will give you a rose everyday for the rest of your life if you will share your life with me'
                  Her face lit the moon and the stars danced to see such love in her eyes. They ran back to the sky and sprinkled stardust into both the new lovers eyes, knowing it would be a story of happy ever after...THE END! pHEW

                  • Angelflower Greeters member
                    June 30
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                    Yay!!!! you should post that.. it was really good lol.. that was so sweet!!! it really made me smile!!! thank you very much.. I needed that..

                    • Cannonsfire silver member
                      June 30

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                      No, it is all yours to do whatever you want with, I like to see you smile hun. Its my gift to you from my wild and over active imagination lol

                      • Angelflower Greeters member
                        June 30

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                        Awww.. but people should see it and read it!!! it's really good!!! Thanks!!! It means a lot.. You really have no idea thank you very much

                        • Cannonsfire silver member
                          June 30
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                          You can cut and paste it if you like tell all it was a gift from me to you. Really hun, it was my pleasure.

  • Reptile Lady gold member
    June 30

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    Lovely hun
    We can all feel these emotions
    I sure do at times
    Julie

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