Natures hidden message
slipping to the sewers..
Heart break, as the dawn comes
With no one ever knowing..
Words said in hidden meaning
Not to my ear but to anothers
Uncertain what to do,
or where to go from here..
With shattered pieces
still remaining..
Nature hears my pleas
and sends loneliness
from clear skies,
As cloaked in falling rain
My misery slips on by,
flowing with the rest of
life's uncertainties, and the
heartbreaks that happened
over time...
Author notes
19 lines..
Prompt:
2) quote: “I love walking in the rain, 'cause then no-one knows I'm crying.”
A contest entry
- ~Picture/Quote/Song inspiration~ (PIF) by Beauty Of Silence.
650 points, ended July 3, 7 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow!
this was definitely deep! the emotions were so raw, very passionate and it was just very heart-breaking! the imagery here was also stunning, a beautiful picture you added at the top too! keep penning and thank you so much for this amazing entry!
much love,
Ranji
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aw this is so sad yet again you paint such a river of tears within your poem filled with silent pain to from the shades of a broken heart With shattered pieces
still remaining..My misery slips on by,flowing with the rest of life's uncertainties, and the heartbreaks that happened over time...I feel I can relate to your saddended pleas from the past the past does not eqaul the future hun it makes us who we are good luck in the contest
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Aw so sad
The pain lays heavy in your lovely words
Good luck in the contest
Julie
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Beautiful quote and beautiful words you have written to it. Love, C
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Thanks.. and maybe if I spelt my title right I might get an HM..lol.
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