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A Man Stone

Roll the heart with carves

as endless life rules the waves.

When storm raze your fate;

Obliterate my bare soul.

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Photos: By chefranden on Flickr

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  • XxYoru-OkamixX
    October 7, 2008
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    i like this poem. it's pretty cool. good job ^^


  • Lotus-Mama
    June 30, 2008
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    Obliterate my bare soul....

    this line is stunning..... a powerful ending!! Great job!!!!