From the deepness of hell I have arisen
Worms sticking in my skin eating my flesh
I have awoken from the silent death
I have awoken from my grave
I sink into pain and all I can see is deep darkness
I groan because of the hole in my chest is empty
I cry in desperation because I can see nothing
This bitter true of me coming back to life not with the living
but with the death numbers of sinners is excruciating
I try to move and step outside this hollow grave yet the little flesh that I have left is
Continuously and merciless pull out by pointy and millions of chains
My flesh is rotten my arm are falling down and bugs are eating my body from the inside out
I try to kill the worms but the more I try the more they come and start feeding from my flesh
This rotten corps of mine
This heavy and dry blood
This heartless body
And this drained soul
I have no much more of those
I’m dead yet my sins will live on with me forever
and these worms will feed on me forever with their hunger still incomplete
Author notes
DarkTears
A contest entry
- Give me something DARK PW allowed by Elle Kaye.
800 points, ended August 13, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Death Contest... by SchizoChic.
600 points, ended August 9, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like that you have taken a different and unique view of life after death, very dark and creepy! Thank you for entering this contest
just a note to ask you to check that you have followed the rules - I wish you the best of luck when it comes to judging!
Keep writing
Polly
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thanks
thank u glad u like it... -
thats so cool! very. umm. graphic. my favourite lines are probably
I try to move and step outside this hollow grave yet the little flesh that I have left is
Continuously and merciless pull out by pointy and millions of chains
very well done. good luck with the contest.
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