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What Makes me a Woman

The sensual touch of her lovers’ hands
upon her flesh, her heart softly flutters
Opening up from her cocoon, she now springs
Alive and rejuvenated, she’s becoming a woman,
as her soul begins to sing.

True love is the intimacy of growing
and exploring new things.
Lightly holding her hands, above her head
you lovingly flow.

Her body moves in simplicity
like a song singing in perfect harmony.
She shivers as she finds so many feelings,
which she’d never known.
You, showed her being a woman
is a power of its own.

With gentle sways of your bodies entwined as one
her soul now radiating as a flickering flame
as you once stood as two-candle stick in the wind
your bodies now began to ignite and melt as one.

She is pure beauty in your eyes,
and she has nothing to hide.
You helped her escape from a place
where she had been held captive in gloom.

You opened your heart,
and than your souls began to bloom.
pLaying the perfect tune.
She is becoming a woman
as you guide her through.


Her once daunting eyes
filled with jealousy and rage.
Your love for her took it all away
and filled it with glistening stars,
which shall never escape.
She now is a woman of assurance.

In her heart, you are alluring
and she learns the manners of the days,
the wonders of fantasy ending in nights play…
She pleases you...
You are her endurance.

Her sweet sensual lips give the lightest of a kiss
Her hands softly and lovingly do drift
As for this woman she is today,
You allowed her to grow
than let her lead the way.

She knows in her heart you are her perfect mate.
Destiny will play, and your loves never to fade
for every wonderful woman, there is a wonderful man
and this is what makes the world go round and round.
as we grow from girl to woman, and boy to man.


Once you have found the perfect mate,
oh’ how growth begins to escalate,
with out my love, I’d never be the woman, that I am today.
“You and Me… growth as a true rhapsody.”


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Written OFr my husband

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  • Beautiful Composition---Very Heartfelt--
    Sugar should be proud!!
    Favorite is concluding stanza--

    "Once you have found the perfect mate,
    oh’ how growth begins to escalate,
    with out my love, I’d never be the woman, that I am today.
    “You and Me… growth as a true rhapsody.”


  • This is beautiful and a wonderful dedication to the man you love ~ thank you for sharing this

  • this is a abther write and it is so beautiful and inspiring. the words are so deep and menaingful and capture a message within the lines as well. a beautiful puiece well done
  • written beautifully, beautiful woman :) :F:F:F:F:F:F


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    June 30

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    Wonderful and inspiring
    We all need to be a Woman, not just a Mother... as I have been told often
    We seem to forget this don't we.
    The love and support from your Husband has clearly made you flourish, and your strength has become you...
    Thank you for sharing these thoughts
    Julie

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