Rambling blue spot
Leaping through
that reckless yellow wave
She wore a blue dress
She smiled in the best of ways
But I'm not
Someone who cares to play games
Hide and seek goes out the window
I spent
twenty three years wandering
Searching for the perfect needle
in that stack of needles
Blue dress
Green eyes
I am the seeker seeking
The hider's eyes
Chasing a chance glance in a crowded room
Today I'll dream of our first dance
Our first kiss
Our great romance
Take my hand dream girl
Tell me your name
I promise you
to seek
to pursue
My girl of green and blue
And never be the same.
Author notes
The artist is Chris Rice. Took me long enough to decide, but it's been worth it. Here's the link to a youtube video of a live performance.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_dVvnsjFjFk
You've inspired me to write another one. Thanks for the muse.
A contest entry
- Poem in the style of a songwriter by Embossed.
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Comments
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Seeking our dream love takes too long lOL Thank goodness mine found me. This is very nice. Thanks for entering
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