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"She Already Is"

a moment in time:

hairdresser clipping my hair
  I am excited
babbling about "Glamour Shots"
      and sharing
        the pretty picture
oooh's! and ahhs!
  He says, Look how beautiful you could be
if you did this everyday.
      YOU simply said, "She already is."

Author notes

little things
It is the little things that we remember.

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  • aidenspektor
    July 11, 2008
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    Ahh, that's so sweet. And I'm not even being sarcastic


  • nature mithya
    July 2, 2008
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    Light simple and Powerful.

    'YOU simply said, "She already is." '
    The real power line.


  • maralisa silver member
    June 30, 2008

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    you are so right many little things in life make such a differance to us everyday wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contest