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Dripping Despair

Missing image
Scratching souls' surface...

staining sanguineous symbols
on dripping walls of despair.

Filthy drapes flutter
filtering all hope from the air.

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20 words on picture, credit: From deviantart
artist *saiaii

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  • toomysterious
    June 30, 2008
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    Perfect companion to the picture. It fits it all so well.


  • toomysterious
    June 30, 2008
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    Perfect companion to the picture. It fits it all so well.


  • PerfectImperfection
    June 30, 2008

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    Ooh I loved this!!! An excellent take on the prompt and you have one of my favorite words in there!! This was truly golden in my book.. Great write!


  • Blooming Poet
    June 30, 2008
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    great