The words come softly, suggesting an easy ride
as questions sear my patience
“Hi, what’s up?”
Nothing much, just thinking… of you, I guess…
Throat’s dry, pulse’s thumping, prickling my neck and chest
“… you sure? … that’s sweetness”
Nerve ending sparking, twitching, just really raw!
Engulfed with sore flesh’s tingeing flashes
“close your eyes & feel my touches…
My fingers are on your hands, free me to feel you”
At a lost in this fantasy, this new reality, worshiping erogenous, my body is captured in his breath, savoring every word…
“I slide over the glistening quivers of delight…
That’s so good, so relaxed and supple…
Offer me the taste of your seeping…”
The warm breath of candied licks flick my nipples, so sticky with lust, down my navel through inner thighs melding artful touches, gathering the new and rare.
“…sense my finger’s energy, my tongue’s swath of desire…”
The rocket’s trajectory loses out to the delight of pure, raw erogenous power, the overpowering rush of it’s surf.
“Easy now, savor the flutters of warm flesh satiated…”
So complete is the soft depth in your comforting,
launch me into oblivion again and again!
ever and forever
lbj/az 06.30.2008
Author notes
AZ is an accomplished writer of lust and erogenous titillating! So I have decided, again (the second time)to counter her perspective.
I am grateful for the opportunity to recast her work with another from the male point of view... There is risk, she may not appreciate the invasion into her creativity!
bj
Is there balance without hearing from the other viewpoint?
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Dang! It sure is sensual and very passionate. I love the feel and the heat you gave off.
haha, well done.
You did great with the voice in this poem.
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This is steamy! what a team, it works together like a finely tuned machine. I am awed by the passion going through this. wwhheeeewwww (mopping forehead)
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Mission Accomplished
If I can contribute to your wwhheeeewwww, there is little doubt about the outcome!
Thanks, mucho grande!
You remain among the greatest that I experience from Day to Day!
God bless AZ!
bj
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Outstanding
Like the more subtle treatment of the highly erotic content. Fuels the imagination with the more sensual approach to lust.
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Thanks
Glad you caught on! Can be a bit of tumultuous ride with AZ... but always worth it!
b
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Ahh...from the other perspective...Sounds like a very metered simulation of wonder!!! I am always honored to have my words stimulate a heated response...after all...I really do not hide my sensuality from the world, do I b? Very nice write...sensual and passionate. Honored by your response my dear friend.
Blessed be b!!!
Az
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Always a Pleasure
You are so easy to satisfy, thanks for being so nice and musing!
b
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