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Closing In

Big room out here,
claustrophobic inside.
Sufficating, swallowed up
by void vastness.
Huddled in the corner,
I'm safe from danger.

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  • aboomer
    July 14

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    Well, for just a few words I think this describes that picture well! I love your last 2 lines - perfect for this.
    best wishes


  • Blooming Poet Greeters member
    June 30
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    great work