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Of My Life

 

 

Drifting technicolour photographs
Sparkle red and blue as so softly
They flow into the black depths
Sinking deeply into the lake
Where the memories of days gone by
Are held until the moment comes
To drag them back into recollection

There to hold them crowned in emerald
Loving recollection, sweetened queens
Of crystal feeling, sucking at the
Sugar coated satisfaction of the times
Of joy and happenstance when the pleasure
Of the moment was enough to ease the
Pressure that arises from a life of strain

With that little piece of paper held
So securely to my soul I can travel ever
Onwards through life's storms and bitter
Snows, even when the picture is faded
And the tatters start to show still I
Remember every feeling every treasure
That has brightened up the darkness

Of my life

 

 

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  • This one is a treasure! I love the flow and your use of words is mmmmmarvelous! ***Pam***

  • Cannot stop reading this one...well Yeah I can but chose to read over and over and over and and and...well I'll be slapped in the face with a slimy wet Mullet...I love this one babe!!
    Dunno why???
    MWAH
    Sista

    • Slap you over the head with a wet mullet? they are much better fried

      Glad you liked it Sista mine

      Yo Bruvva
  • Treasures come in all shapes and sizes and are perceived differently by each of us.

    I liked your words and the flow of them.



    Love Margaret

    • Thank you Margaret, I'm glad you liked the poem and thanks for your comment.

      Adrian
    • so how come you missed the spelling hiccup Huh? Huh?
      • My Sistas shouldn't fight...especially when you both pointed them out the same way.

        Anyway, I thought the rule was, "i before e except when I spelt it"
        • There are exceptions to the rule and babe you are ONE BIG EXCEPTION
          Always on ya tail bro
          MWAH from ya sista
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