Mossy time
an encasement for my weary soul
time enprisons me
life laughs
growing atop me
Author notes
#1
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXV - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 3, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Do you agree/disagree, am I crazy? Can anyone identify at least a little bit?
Comments
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Thank You for Your Time!!
Thank You for Your entry: Covered in green time
I came back to re-read and still counted 16 Words
which this contest calls for 15 however soon I will be having a pre-write contest for those who entered my past contests~ Wish I could have given this a Trophy or HM but maybe next time
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I was being shown word enprisons- and it looks like spelling according to dictionary should be imprisons- but I knew what You meant
while I was reading I kept seeing words: high school but also a reference to swimming- also I'm being shown a hand painting as if gifted with as I am seeing reference to: straight lines- I'm being shown box shapes- whether metaphor or symbolism- like geometry
Hopefully that makes some sense
Magnificent take on the prompt-
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
time enprisons (imprisons) me...
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Oh My~
I am counting and re-counting- it appears You have 16 Words and this contest calls for 15 Words I will be reading other entries and always read every piece again. I'll be back, hopefully You will have 15 by then
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