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Translucence

Missing image
They tarry in translucence

radiant in remnants of moonbeam
cloaked with the purity
of divine intercession.

Twin souls time travel
breaking boundaries
seeking peace among purple peaks.

Far too soon dawn breaks
bringing mournful howling
to herald a painful parting.






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40 words on picture, Credit: The_Visitor_by_Tolkienmaster

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  • Angelflower
    June 30, 2008

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    Aww. I really love this..The story was really sweet and yet the ending was sorrowful as well.. I really liked this. thank you very much for sharing.. Best of luck..

    Angel


  • Kari gold member
    June 30, 2008

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    This was really lovely, and kinda sighed a lil bit at the end from the beauty of this piece.
    Well done,
    Kari


  • toomysterious
    June 30, 2008
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    Another lovely answer to the prompt.